I have my dance Instagram account where I need a hook or a good shot so that my videos get more views, I am always aware of my insights and analyze why I get good or bad results, therefore I know how to put them into practice and it gives me good results.

I'd start the video with a brief glimpse of the great result to serve as a hook. Then I'd cut to a shot with the before, application process, and after. Finally, I'd do a blended shot where half the face shows the before, and the other half the after.

It's a good feed, but I personally think it doesn't appeal to people enough, or it can be a pain to read the information, and at first glance, it's hard to tell what each product is. People spend time on social media, but as soon as a reel or post doesn't catch their attention, they don't stop to watch it. This could be improved with some visual appeal.